Maytal,
Not only did I like the way you read your first expository writing, but you wrote in a very interesting way. The beginning sentence made me want to read more, and the ending sentence was a good summary. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
LYFTIAB
xoxo
Bubbie
Donna Bader
May 15, 2019 at 7:49 pm (5 years ago)Maytal,
Not only did I like the way you read your first expository writing, but you wrote in a very interesting way. The beginning sentence made me want to read more, and the ending sentence was a good summary. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
LYFTIAB
xoxo
Bubbie